Haiku 2

Clouds cover the mountains
Wind blows,trees sway,a leaf falls
Water falls from the sky.

Published by rayjam

J.Gi Federizo 01/12/201411:44 am Reply

I imagine quite a serene place….

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1. rehmanjafar 01/12/201412:38 pm Reply
  
  I wanted the reader to feel that,guess I did a fine job.Thanks 🙂
  
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unbolt 01/12/20144:27 pm Reply

Cool!
But it’s not a classical haiku (I’m so sorry for my remark!!)
It’s 6-6-6, not 5-7-5…

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1. rehmanjafar 01/12/20146:46 pm Reply
  
  I know but I gave myself this relaxation for being a starter.
  
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  1. unbolt 01/12/20147:09 pm
    
    😉
    
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