Miss Book Thief wrote a poem with a different perspective and it has turned out be great, at least I think so.
The link to my work is below, you’d want to read it to make the whole thing a little sensible.
https://thecrookedmind.wordpress.com/2015/12/06/the-coffee-shop/
This is the girl’s perspective of the poem The Coffee Shop by Jafar. I loved it so much, so I wrote this. You can read his poem by clicking on the link.
I’m the girl in the coffee shop
Writing about you, the boy
On the other side of
The glass door.
Rihanna is crooning in my ear
About how even if she reaches all her fingers
She can feel more than distance between them.
And that’s how I feel
Looking at you
You spot me, and I quickly
Duck my head down, pretending
To doodle in my notebook.
I see you come and sit inside
Out of the corner of my eye
You think I don’t notice you
But, I watch you everyday
When you’re not looking.
It’s been days now
My book is full of poems, about
The way the sunlight glints in your hair,
Turning it brown
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