Raindrops start to fall from sky
She looks up and smiles
Choking on her breath
She thanks The Almighty
For it hides her tears
And her ruined face.
It is weird how I get nothing for weeks and my mind stays blank and all of a sudden it all comes back like water rushing down the hill and I start writing out of the blue.I will also use this opportunity to thankΒ Nishita13(her blog),for encouraging me via comments on my previous haiku(s) and poems,thank you.
Beautiful love the contrast in the images really great work . Kathy.
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I’m glad you liked it,thank you.
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Aah! Rain π
Also read https://jyotsnabasotiaandawishfulworld.wordpress.com/2014/03/14/the-realm-of-rain/
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Liked it π
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I really like the powerful imagery created by this, thank you for a great post π
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Thank you very much π
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That’s not a problem at all, I look forward to more posts like this π
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Hopefully you’ll get to see some soon. π
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that would be great, keep up the good work π
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Thanks again for the encouraging words.
I’m glad to have you as a reader. π
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That’s okay, I appreciate your kind words π
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The face ruined by heartbreak
Finally looks up at the pouring sky
Hidden with a smile
For finally the skies understand
What goes on everyday inside
I know it’s impromptu and brash but it just kind of popped in my mind
Beautiful piece yet again π
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Oh,she can indeed have a lot of different reasons for being like she is.I might even write a second part of it sometime later.
But I find your one quite amazing, π
You should definitely write more.
Thank you for the comment. π
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you flatter me oh sightbearer
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I speak whatsoever is necessary,that’s all I do.
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in that case keep speaking π
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Ah,you are smart! π
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you do realize that we could go on and on like this :O
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I know that but does it really matter?
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you very much π
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[…] This is the continuation of thisΒ short poem. […]
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